Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes is one of the most widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long-term health costs are high- for the smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.Do Governments have a legitimate role to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to an individual?”
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual argument, a constructive dialogue on
tobacco can lead to thought provoking discussion. My view is that, irrespective of the numerous
argument that exist on either side, how to do government limit in this smoking or it handle with people.
In this essay, I shall put forth my points and calculations by considering both sides of the arguments.
There are several reasons for my stance. Firstly, tobacco is a addictive things and it become a harmful in
our body. This is because more people are addictive for smoking without think about money. For
instance, daily smoking causes are getting to cancer. Thus, in a nutshell, the aforementioned discussion
justifies my stance.
Another interesting point is that government should impose to rules and regulations for limit their
smoking behavior but also it not handle with people. This is mainly due to the fact that people fear to
rules and regulations before smoking. To quote an example, the research conducted by department of
the American society also reflects on the similar lines, and hence, it can be said that proposition is
convincingly justified.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the argument I have provided, my opinion is
that the topic of the statement does reflect on the justification that provided here.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual argument, a constructive d...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'handles'?
Suggestion: handles
... government limit in this smoking or it handle with people. In this essay, I shall pu...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sons for my stance. Firstly, tobacco is a addictive things and it become a harmfu...
^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...y, tobacco is a addictive things and it become a harmful in our body. This is because...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 34, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'handles'?
Suggestion: handles
...their smoking behavior but also it not handle with people. This is mainly due to the ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2197309417 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8965902496 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62331838565 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6981863072 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0983647270458 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391272851071 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352064199477 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0282420280203 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379770187214 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual argument, a constructive d...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'handles'?
Suggestion: handles
... government limit in this smoking or it handle with people. In this essay, I shall pu...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...sons for my stance. Firstly, tobacco is a addictive things and it become a harmfu...
^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...y, tobacco is a addictive things and it become a harmful in our body. This is because...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 34, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'handles'?
Suggestion: handles
...their smoking behavior but also it not handle with people. This is mainly due to the ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2197309417 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8965902496 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62331838565 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6981863072 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0983647270458 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391272851071 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352064199477 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0282420280203 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379770187214 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.