'schools should prepare students for university, rather than for work.'
How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/ or examples from your own experience or observations
Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual arguments, a constructive dialogue
on students prepare to go campus by schooling can lead to thought provoking discussion. My view is
that, irrespective of the numerous argument that exist on either side, school prepare students go to
university more than work. In this essay, I shall put of my points and calculations by considering both
sides of the arguments.
There are several reasons for my stance. Firstly, school is well prepare student’s higher education level.
Furthermore, school is a well education center for student’s improve educational knowledge and
behavior. This is because it helps to join with advanced level education to their career progress. For
instance, students work hard for their high school exam to enter the university. Thus, in a nutshell, the
aforementioned discussion justifies my stance.
Another interesting point is that School student must go to the university in their bright future rather
than work. Because of the that after school student do not arrange money. Moreover, student should
lean to highest study for develop our country and meaningful career path. For example, the research
conducted by department of the American society also reflects on the similar lines, and hence, it can be
said that proposition is convincingly justified.
I see that is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion
is that school should prepare student’s bright future for university more than work.
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Comments
It's also worth noting that…
It's also worth noting that in order to have a successful future, today's high school students must attend college only up
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...lthough such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual arguments, a constructive ...
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Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'argument'?
Suggestion: argument
...kelihood, never will yield a consensual arguments, a constructive dialogue on students p...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prepared'.
Suggestion: prepared
... for my stance. Firstly, school is well prepare student’s higher education level. Furt...
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Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
..., school is a well education center for student’s improve educational knowledge and beha...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the highest'.
Suggestion: to the highest
...e money. Moreover, student should lean to highest study for develop our country and meani...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49382716049 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92296968841 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59670781893 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4889890568 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.12807881773 412% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322071980853 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111218219721 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614565904106 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966045040274 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837508675534 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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