In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small shop. Do you agree and disagree?
The importance of the large shopping mall should replace the small shop which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in a recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will elaborate both positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad reasons which will explain these argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that the large shopping mall should replace small shop this is very important because large shopping mall cover large area for build. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is fact that large shopping mall replace small shop its important think is reduce the noise pollution and traffic. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However there are some pitfalls that negate these argument which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one stems is that large shopping mall should replace small shop this is big problem for poor people his not easy buy the product because large shopping mall products price is very high. Besides, the people scorching bread and butter of local retailer. It is can be agreed that upside is of instrumental indeed. However it is has some various drawbacks as well. Hence large shopping mall replace the small shop apparent why many against this trend.
According to a argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that benefits large shopping mall should replace small shop of instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should be not overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15753424658 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5157320729 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503424657534 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.2426990118 50.4703680194 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415961095787 0.242375264174 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148094649779 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15879932794 0.071462118173 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301078149994 0.151781067708 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846354161648 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.