In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. Discuss both views.
The tourism industry has become a controversial issue among all countries. Due to the transportation advancement, traveling to another country is more popular. Considering this, while some people tend to believe that, this increasing trend can be beneficial for host countries, many opponents argued to this view. This essay discussed both views by providing some academic evidence before concluding.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why travel lovers tend to support this industry. Firstly, according to the high demand rate of different services tourism industry brings with itself, such as hotels, restaurants, and other accommodations, this could be beneficial for host countries in terms of economic and job opportunities. secondly, it could lead to cultural diversity in developing countries and surely brings many advantages. According to an academic research conducted by Tehran University in 2014, more than 24% of inhabitants in historical places, are witnessing improvement in public awareness about international communication. Not to mention that tourism is a green industry which less participating in environmental pollution.
On the other hand, such as every human industry, tourism could bring some suffers as well. Opponents use an essential valid logic to prove that tourism could bring cultural shocks to some countries, mostly developing ones. According to statistical reports presented by Esfahan University, many youngsters are tending to imitate lifestyles and customs of tourists which lead to vanishing their own culture and tradition. Furthermore, governments should do some deforestation due to the fact that expanding tourism accommodation and facilities needs more space.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that tourism industry is like a two-edged sword. However, I profoundly inclined to believe that its beneficial aspects are far more than its drawbacks and countries should look at this industry as an opportunity to communicate with other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...erms of economic and job opportunities. secondly, it could lead to cultural diversity in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76430976431 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16985083093 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619528619529 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2503521115 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.133333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138038739174 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465181252341 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395511350874 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084054068345 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040959243017 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 55.0591133005 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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