Universities should be concerned with educating people so that they have wide general knowledge and be able to consider important matters to form a considered view point and not simply train students to do the jobs required by society.
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Some people believe that colleges should be focusing in providing good education to students by giving them broader knowledge and must take into account the significant topics needed to have a perspective and not just only help them to perform jobs dictated by the community. I completely assent to the foregoing argument due to having more job opportunities and to be globally competitive. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, the requirements of workforce today are coming from competent individuals. This sounds true for the company's qualifications on a certain role. A person equipped with vital knowledge and basic skills acquired from educational institutions can be able to outperform those that are not. For example, an engineering graduate can do design works based on technical principles learned from school . Hence, investing on wider platform of information while studying will be a tool to secure better work opportunities.
Apart from this, the fact that graduates from prestige universities will become globally competitive. They can pursue a career that is favorable to them and theories that are taught in academies can be applied into their day-to-day tasks. Seemingly, it would also not be difficult for the college graduate to find opportunities abroad and would showcase their talents and skills in obtaining a promising role in a global scale company. To illustrate, many Filipinos have been recognized by their ability and profound knowledge on marketing that is why they are the most sought nationality in Asia.
To recapitulate, academic institutions must continually provide the best education for students so that they can be able to acquire better jobs after graduation and become competitive internationally. Indeed, it is the responsibility of schools to produce a well-rounded professionals that will be the future workforce of the nation.
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| 2018-06-15 | Fiona Joanna Cruz | 85 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45973154362 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16958764443 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 139.433497537 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1471130852 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.214285714 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211076135889 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663142729689 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522500925022 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132330973723 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317563367544 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.