Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, televisions channels and movies have showed increasing numbers of violence scenes. Some people believe that viewing violence on the screen of movies and TV will alter their audience to become criminals, while others argue that people who watch these violence scenes are more awareness, and these movies will not affect on their behavior. This essay will discuss how these criminal scenes have a strong influence on the people behavior, and can alter them into criminals.
Increasing number of crimes scenes in TV channels and movies will affect on people, especially on youth. Some people are trying to imitate what they see in their lives. Recent research, which was conducted in USA, has shown that 58% of the American people mimic what they watch on TV, and this led to increase in the criminal rate by 11% than it was before 1990. Therefore, the criminal scenes which are showed on TV channels and in movies affect significantly on people behavior and it led to increase the violence inside communities.
On the other hand, some people think that these violence scenes could help to increase the consciousness between people. People may understand the risk of doing criminal behavior. For example, youths are understanding that doing any criminal activity will lead them to the jail. These people are unaware of the fact that these violence scenes have led increasing domestic violent. Thus, movies which contain violence scenes have led to increase the number of criminal in the societies.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how the violent scenes in the TV channels and movies have led to increase number of criminal, and people behaviors have become more violent. In my opinion, TV channels and movies should stop showing the violence scenes, and they have to select the movies which talk about history or drama rather than violent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 310.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10322580645 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44072284204 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451612903226 0.580463131201 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7968953447 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317954129979 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129212595973 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675427603526 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224599694536 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365641823564 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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