Nowadays, inventions are happening every day in every field made the life of human being comfortable as well as difficult. I opine that living in an era in which new things are being invented is more beneficial, while on the other hand stands a perspective that these technological inventions have more adverse effects on our life. This essay will further elaborate on both the sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of benefits of living in the invention's era. The most preponderant one is that inventions in the field of technology has connected the whole world together by making the information access far more easier. In the field of healthcare, the discovery of new antibiotic medicines and operation machines has not only increased the life of human, but also made it disease free. Therefore, these newly discovered methods and techniques are great blessings for the human beings.
Notwithstanding, there are some pitfalls that can certainly overwhelm the benefits of spending life in the era of inventions. The most conspicuous one is that these new inventions are becoming main reason of several severe hackles like as, pollution, chronic diseases, and unemployment. Moreover, all these problems made the life of the people more difficult as compared to past time. As an illustration, in India, the problem of pollution has increased drastically from last three years. it hardly needs mention that all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on the people.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some drawbacks, the benefits of living in the inventions are indeed too great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17164179104 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90395371938 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.182323028 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221334976041 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748665518894 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972272849333 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130274967047 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756325989451 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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