What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is people opting to leave in cities than rural areas. There is a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. In this essay, we shall discuss on advantages of living in big cities compared to rural areas and the ways to rectify the problems in rural areas.
There is a myriad of reasons accountable for living in cities is a better option. The most preponderant one is those big cities have many companies and business centers, therefore there are abundant chances of getting employment. Furthermore, developed cities have a well-planned infrastructure which not only makes the people life easier but also make them have a better lifestyle. Needless to say, all these merits have a far-reaching impact on people not opting to leave in rural areas.
Steps to deal with this problem are many, the most effective ones are not remote and complicated, but accessible and practicable. The primary one lies in the fact that Government should put an effort in improvising the infrastructure. Besides, International organizations can help in funding to develop rural areas.
To conclude, dealing with this issue is one of the most prevalent issues that faced by almost all countries of the world today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps as discussed earlier can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1218487395 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89579941669 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584033613445 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0430127251 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7692307692 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139783471561 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049722361238 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743720700027 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867732394252 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695518240488 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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