What are the main reasons of violent behavior in the professional institutions today?
People generally go to professional institutions to gain knowledge and degree to achieve their goals and accomplishment in their life. People of inadequate etiquette always a spike and sound etiquette attitude provide wisdom of calm. In this essay, I shall discuss the reasons which are responsible for provoking the violence in behavior engulfed in institution's environment and farther will explore the influences.
To start with, there are myriad and conspicuous factors which are main proponent to raise the violence. One of them is attitude of individual cultivate the thoughts of destruction to acquire the leadership. For example, students studying in institution may phase different challenges and to overcome these problems, they breach the infringement and disobey the rules and regulations. Growing in competitive environment can nurture to tackle down with success or failure.
Furthermore, abuse words spark and make high inflammable of thoughts. Other reason includes of parameters of regulations and management cause heavily loss of etiquette in knowledge system. Some people play actively with eagerness to achieve success and pursue shortcut which further cultivate their mind with bad thoughts with stealing, shoplifting and many others. On revealing these bad shortcuts they frustrate and cause brawl, rapes and assault crimes with others.
In recapitulate, while there are strong reasons discussed which give birth to violent behaviour of individual in the professional institutions. In my personal opinion, higher-ups must levy the heavy penalty and charges on violators.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75847457627 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03941773764 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639830508475 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0601076114 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15280151747 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445282324663 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585788228972 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878378831947 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517566796027 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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