What is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain why?
Whether science, technology or medicine is the great invention in last 100 years has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views in favor of medicine, science and technology through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. In below essay of mine, I will try to enunciate all the benefits of antibiotics, travel and computer.
One of the most beneficial inventions is the antibiotics of multiple diseases such as cancer, AIDS, heart attack. Now people are less scared of diseases, as they are aware of treatment and their benefits. In the past many people did not even realize of the health problems but thanks to the new researches helped us to know the diseases.
The other invention is technology which is also connecting people from one country to another by different types of transportation. For example plan travel, cruise and by road .Nowadays, people can reach to the other destination in few hours because of these services.
Moreover, other inventions also made life easy through computer. People can search anything and anywhere using laptops, tabs and internet.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, Antibiotics are most beneficial development as it can reduce the cause of death and people can live longer, however other two factors are also prominent for human beings.
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21610169492 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92446257066 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631355932203 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4918000752 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.909090909 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957077525313 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379176709097 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469039399137 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476593447038 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399513707941 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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