What do you think about our environment considering the fact that there has been steady increase in pollution and affects like global warming are increasing as time is passing by? Are we under jeopardy? Is the humanity safe?
In the recent past, the environment has changed drastically, there has been a constant increment in the pollution level and the world has seen many calamities. These changes have raised concerned around the globe. Many people believe that pollution is affecting our lives, whereas some groups ignore the phenomenon. In my opinion, the environment is certainly in danger and humanity is at the risk. This essay will illustrate various concerns and possible resolutions.
To commence with, nowadays, the environment is under the threat of various type of pollution and various factors such as industrialisation, a humongous population growth and deforestation are some of the causes of pollution. Poisonous gases are deteriorating the atmosphere and impacting the ozone layer. Likewise, factories are polluting rivers and lakes by depositing chemicals. For example, the ozone layer has been depleted just above Australia and scientists believe it can augment the risk of skin cancer.
In addition to that, due to global warming, many countries are under constant danger of flooding. In addition to that aquatic life is also suffering from water pollution. For instance, 40% of aquatic animals are on the verge of extinction. Furthermore, the government is promoting various activities such as energy-conservation, tree sapling and putting a hefty fine on factories for polluting air and water.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable to ignore the consequence of pollution. Humanities is certainly going to disappear if we do not control it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 5.75862068966 382% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51054852321 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22363973754 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611814345992 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.629699644 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0666666667 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136574849004 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391011433211 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394698237853 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781950766994 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261182014094 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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