In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages?
Recently, a conspicuous trend of tourism has been observed around the developing countries. Tourism plays a pivotal role in the social and economic growth of the country. Many believe and suggest the benefits of tourism, but opponents think otherwise. In my opinion, tourism has numerous advantages and this essay will illustrate the merits and demerits of tourism in developing countries.
To begin with, it is undeniable that impacts of tourism phenomenal in country’s growth. Not only it improves the living conditions of the local people but also escalate the revenue of the country. For instance, tourists spend money on buying local food, souvenirs, goods and entertainment. Many hotels, lodges and entertainment hubs operate to cater to tourists which results in proving employment to local communities and young generation.
On the other hand, tourism has disadvantages as well. Many tourists show rowdy behaviour and don’t respect local tradition. They throw garbage like plastic bottles, cigarettes buds after consumptions which hurt the ecology and local environment. For example, a tourist uploaded a video on social video website showing the poverty of hosting country which led to defamation of a particular country.
To conclude, as per the aforementioned statements, tourism creates a positive influence in a country’s growth, In my opinion, its advantages always outweigh demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69953051643 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09167673459 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2560839843 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2994923664 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102840265626 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129815589136 0.071462118173 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162714773376 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156580739351 0.0609392437508 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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