What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why?
Our society has witnessed tremendous inventions in different sectors such as health, air transportation and information technology for past century. While most people have argued that the most appealing inventions so far are the discovery of airplane and computers which has made transportation and communication across the globe easy. However, in my view, the discovery and improvements of antibiotics is the most important because health is wealth and without combating various epidemics in the society no one would have been alive to invent anything.
On the one hand, inventions of airplane and computers have really made transportation and communications across the world easier. Unlike before, it was difficult to travel from one country to another and also communication from one country to another was nearly impossible. The inventions of computers have really made it possible to transact business easily without travelling. Also airplane has helped in globalising the world since one can visit any part of the world now without restrictions. This is just one side of the argument.
On the other hand, our society has faced a lot of outbreaks which were capable of wiping off humans in the world if not by the intervention of the improved antibiotics. For example, malaria was a serious pandemic in the world especially in the African continent. WHO reported that malaria was killing 10 children out of every 100 children born in Africa until the invention of anti-malaria drugs by research centers and international health organisations. Also in the last decade, there was an Ebola outbreak worldwide, which was capable of killing everybody in the world and this was combated by the discovery of strong antibiotics. If people were not alive they would not have invented any of these new ideas in airplane and computer which we are celebrating today.
In conclusion, the invention of computers and airplane has really contributed to the economic growth of our society, but I believe that the discoveries of antibiotics are the key to all these inventions because they have helped in sustaining lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...act business easily without travelling. Also airplane has helped in globalising the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 31.9359605911 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1207.87684729 148% => OK
No of words: 338.0 242.827586207 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27514792899 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02872612849 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508875739645 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 379.143842365 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0874950718 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.357142857 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155598456308 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566740864763 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396405945454 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099164247843 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448941981855 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.