Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Law, in general, is written rules and regulations that are meant for individuals or groups of the society. Law was created, and intended, to guide and shape behavior. I believe law affects people’s behavior. The punishment or reward associated with law causes people to change their behavior.
Law is for the betterment of society and individuals. The consequences of obeying or disobeying laws impacts people in their everyday lives. Thereby, law influences how people behave with others in a society. Breaking the law would mean trouble. This fear of consequences makes people behave in both their social and professional capacities. For example, earlier ‘male homosexual acts’ were a crime in many nations and now with advancement in law, people are now accepting gay members and open about their sexuality.
Many times, people experience legal problems, and these legal problems can impact negatively on their life areas. The mental harassment can bring considerable adverse consequences like going against the system. On the other hand, the law to ensure women’s rights makes the women feel equal and safe in society thus bringing a positive change in their behavior. In this sense, laws do influences people behavior in very significant ways.
In conclusion, as a result of facing possible penalties, people are forced to behave responsibly and do good to other and society. Obey the law and get the reward. The law constantly changes our behavior and perception toward many things in our daily lives consciously and unconsciously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41224489796 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92456883554 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583673469388 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.514511049 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4117647059 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338280222603 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123963543387 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909430011783 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224890132577 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732343437244 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.