What is the influence of the region on person’s success?
The environment or the surrounding where a person lives effect to their personality. This essay would discuss on the factors which effect to personal development.
Normally children are influenced by the adults around them. Therefore the region where they brought up influences on their behaviour. People who commit into crimes were adopted in shanties for most of the instances. Also each region inherits different types of cultures, therefore the culture where people were adopted is reflected in their later adult life. In most of the developing countries resources do not allocate in a fair manner, therefore person’s development is highly effected on the resource allocation of the government. Moreover, the education facilities available in regions are different in majority of the countries of the world. As a result people who were born in developed countries get the opportunity of having a reasonable education. Not Only education, residents of developed nations get more nutrition and health facilities than people who resides in developing nations. However it is argued that disparity of resource allocation among regions result in person’s success to gether with culrural differences.
In conclusion, it is proven that region of resident has severely effects personal development except few extraordinary situations. Some people have changed their lives on their detrmination and courage irrespective of the region they have grown up.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding adults'?
Suggestion: the surrounding adults
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e influenced by the adults around them. Therefore the region where they brought up influe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... in shanties for most of the instances. Also each region inherits different types of...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a fair manner" with adverb for "fair"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing countries resources do not allocate in a fair manner, therefore person's development is...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...majority of the countries of the world. As a result people who were born in develo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ople who resides in developing nations. However it is argued that disparity of resource...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66363636364 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05400428106 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6108956693 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8461538462 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235700366214 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840340314282 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736791540015 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142606727705 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045959915077 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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