When computers first appeared on the scene, it was thought that they would make us more productive in providing goods and services, smarter and possibly happier…
Knowingly or unknowingly everyone has become dependent on computer and it has turned out to be an significant part of our life. Though computer has turned its gates to many unwanted activity, pros outweigh the cons, hence I believe that computers makes us more productive, smarter and happier than ever before.
Invention of computer has converted many manual work to automation. Ticketing system is IRCTC is the best example for this. Earlier people used to stand in queue for hours, to book few tickets. But now, it was performed in their own homes in fraction of seconds.
Internet in computer has integrated people across the world. This increases the productivity and efficiency of people. Import and export business are best examples for this growth. As per Indian times January edition, export business is providing majority of revenue for the Government.
Though computer provides huge benefits to people across nation, it has also affected a part of younger generation. Social media and integrated games like PUBG are few instances to explain this. Youth nowadays have a tendency to spend more time before computer, resulting in low grades and health degrade.
To conclude, though computer provides us a happy and healthy surrounding with higher efficiency and productivity, people should use it on requirement basis only.
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- should government spend more money on improving roads and highways or, should government spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Use specific reasons and details. 60
- Around the world, solar energy is becoming a more popular source of energy for many households. Why do you think this is so? What are the advantages and disadvantages of using solar energy to power one’s home? 80
- Some people say that self-driving cars will be a benefit to the society, while others believe they will cause more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your own opinion using relevant examples. 77
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people believe that price is the only consideration while buyingsomething. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give youropinion and include relevant examples. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...on computer and it has turned out to be an significant part of our life. Though co...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry edition, export business is providing majority of revenue for the Government. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29107981221 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71343632142 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671361502347 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2272942254 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162755317773 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461921428052 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049094947805 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829574676973 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432507114469 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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