Whether design of the building has a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
One of the most of conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in seeing many people believe that design of the building has a positive impact on people’s life at work. There is a widespread worry that this would only lead to a myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that people working in the well-designed building feel proud and have a positive attitude towards the work. Not only will building inspire employees to put more efforts, but it will also lead to increase in the productivity. Needless to say, all these benefits stand employees in good stead as far as safety is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect is that penetration of natural sources such as air and sunlight in the building can have tremendous effect on work force. Not only asserted their adverse impact on people’s mood, but also architect’s view that beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. People are more attracted to engage with companies with have proper infrastructure and design. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of well-designed building.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of well-designed building are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01339285714 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01550190745 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8802022463 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5833333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376151598709 0.242375264174 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111157565652 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138491414463 0.071462118173 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211356344239 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876715926228 0.0609392437508 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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