Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that architecture of a building would effect the people’s mind negatively or positively. In my opinion, this statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the main features of this essay before deducing a final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that building designs have strong influence on people’s mind. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that an ancient building depicts the creativity of it’s architect. Moreover, the unique and innovative carving of designs provokes the positivity in the surroundings. As a prime example, the great temples of Buddha are the master piece of art and architecture that attracts tourists from all around the world. Furthermore, besides color scheme and antique work of a building, design of a building matters a lot to change one’s mind.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that buildings also effects the mood negatively. For instance, congested and dark buildings with improper ventilation circulates negativity in surrounding and people are uncomfortable in that environment.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that building designs not only effect person’s mood but also create confusion with congested environment. Thus ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64414414414 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11990514799 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1011706742 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.416666667 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295862417087 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943232528181 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747067339371 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152829422597 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616571086813 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.