Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend of prodigies discussing the influence of building’s architecture on an individuals’ life. Some people maintain that the design and architecture of the building have a positive impact in a person’s life, while other maintain that they might bear a negative impact. This essay will discuss that why the design and architecture of the buildings have positive impact on an individual’s life.
At the outset, myriad of benefits can be attributed to the well construction and beautifully designed buildings. Firstly, the most conspicuous is that buildings with well constructed interior and spacious work place will have a direct influence on a workers mindset. Therefore, this scenario will boost the output and working capabilities of the workers. As a matter of fact, it is undeniable that well constructed buildings have a positive effect on a person’s mindset.
Moreover, well constructed and designed buildings need to have proper ventilation and exposure of sunlight into all of the rooms or offices. This is mandatory as sunlight possesses Vitamin D which is an essential element for better human health. For instance, a study by prestigious university has revealed that owing to poor design of buildings and less exposure to sunlight more than 40 percent of workers are Vitamin D deficient. Thus, needless to say, that well constructed and designed buildings not only bears a positive or negative impact but also influences human health.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds the view that spacious, well constructed buildings housing proper ventilation and exposure to sunlight can have better impacts on people’s life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5358490566 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26223304982 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6581621583 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478482870831 0.242375264174 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183844443111 0.0925447433944 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130127274429 0.071462118173 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289316827521 0.151781067708 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121624761518 0.0609392437508 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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