With the development of engineering technology, high-rise buildings in various shapes are constructed all over the world. There is a heated debate regarding positive and negative impacts on humans from these innovative designs. This essay will discuss how people are motivated from modern office environments and the effects on employees’ health.
People like to work in offices with modern facilities and sophisticated infrastructure. It improves their motivation and their creative thinking is developed. For instance, most of the blue chip companies are located in new buildings such as skyscrapers and employees have positive attitudes towards work. Therefore, this kind of work areas fulfil psychological needs of workforce and it increases productivity.
On the other hand, current building designs affect certain aspects of health because these are fully air-conditioned and windows are covered with curtains to save electricity. Humans need fresh air and sunlight for their good health. Nowadays a considerable proportion of people suffer from vitamin D deficiency and in air-conditioned backgrounds, certain diseases such as colds spread rapidly. Hence, possible health hazards should be considered during the design stage of infrastructure.
In summary, sophisticated office concepts empower employees and help to increase profits of companies and there are negative ramifications related to public health. In my opinion, infrastructure plays a vital role for the success of businesses and suitable actions should be taken to improve health aspects of modern built environments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in summary, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91810344828 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23791255824 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646551724138 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7309064531 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18392904804 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567352676508 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517240640506 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101851266549 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070109259832 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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