Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countires. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals?

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Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countires. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals?

Due to globalization, deep rooted fear towards the foreigner, which is also known as 'Xenophobia' is accelerated at a fast pace. In the western part of the world, Xenophobia among the denizens have buried deeply. Hence, it is crucial that the Government and as well as the individual should do concerted efforts to curb this issue.

The preponderant reason behind the rise in Xenophobia is a terrorism and diaspora which simultaneously have given birth to racism, hatred and fear among the natives in respect to the migrants.To combat this issue, first and foremost, the Government should take the responsibility of spreading awareness among the people and promote acceptance of different culture.

Moreover, country's law should be strict in respect of racism and also for the security and safety of the citizens, which enhance the sense of safety among them and build trust on them for the administration of the country. Furthermore, individuals also emerge the habit of tolerance among them and also teach their children to respect the people irrespective of any religion, caste and color.

In the nutshell, It is irrefutable that the fear among the people of foreigners is an upsurge in the western world. However, with the implementation of the right law and by educating the people to vanish their fear can aid to promote peace in a country and also helpful to fight against the problem of xenophobia.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ds the foreigner, which is also known as Xenophobia is accelerated at a fast pace...
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... the natives in respect to the migrants.To combat this issue, first and foremost, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09482758621 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92401542928 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538793103448 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7137048219 50.4703680194 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.75 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123187763517 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583777749703 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247409542058 0.071462118173 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770786573071 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462414478653 0.0609392437508 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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