Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals?
The rapidly growht culture conflicts among western countires have been seen recently. This essay will propose some solutions that can be implemented by government and individuals.
It is common to see misunderstanding happened among people from different countries. A simple thing may have different values due to their background. Such as Indian use their hands to grap food while others from differnet countires may seen it is not a healhty behavior, therefore, conflict occure. As individuals, we can try to put ourselve on other people's shoes, and respect our different. Additionally, we can look up more Internet about their cultures and learn other people's thinking to view the world.
Governemnts also need to take their responsiblities for the xenophobia. People may see migrators as enemy because the limit resource could be shared, and job opportunity may be taken by foreigner as well. What a government can do is educate their civics and impose legisterlation. People from different places seeing things different which propose more creative things. Migrators also can contirbute to labor market for aging population country. Governemnt can educate through media. Singapore as an example, more than fifty percent of demography is from other countires. They welcome forginers to work for them, and impose a rule to punish the racism.
In conclusion, governments can impose rules and through media to educate people while individuals can respect others.
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| 2019-06-27 | Karie Tseng | 77 | view |
- Governments should focus on people's life or technologies used for space travel. Use your personal example, to what extend you agree. 80
- Some people argue that young people should concentrate on study or work some people think it is better to put energy in activities designed to broaden their experience such as international travel and volunteering Support with examples or cases 91
- Governments should focus on people's life or technologies used for space travel. Use your personal example, to what extend you agree. 88
- Life experience or education 72
- It is important to maintain the balance between work and other aspects of one’s life such as family and leisure activities. Please give your opinion about how important to maintain the balance and why some people think it is hard to do it? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...ile others from differnet countires may seen it is not a healhty behavior, therefore...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...b opportunity may be taken by foreigner as well. What a government can do is educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46929824561 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95215189837 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1216355489 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9375 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206767573929 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650418048875 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679948110192 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146355923617 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747194616337 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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