In your opinion, what has been the most important invention of the past 10 years?
In my perspective, invention of smart phones is the most crucial discovery of last decade. People are enjoying myriads of benefits of smart phones; expedition of processors and huge internal memory are the most promising features amongst the many.
Almost all smartphones even of low prices have fast processors. Nowadays, because of speedy processors one can use the mobiles as mini computers. They can perform several jobs, such as calculations, documentation, data keepings. On contrary, phones existing before this invention were used only for calling and texting ,and in addition, phones of those period has very limited features: memory only suffice to save contact list and so forth.
Next significant feature of these booming smart phones is internal memory. People do not have to carry separate cameras, music player, dictionaries and so forth. These smart phones are capable of performing multiple tasks like video recording and photo taking; finding direction using compass, music playing, finding GPS location, heart beat to list a few.
In a nutshell, invention of smart technologies in such phones was proved to be one of the most beneficial discovery of last decade for right use of smart phone definitely increases the efficiency of mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 198.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76917400334 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5742998221 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0605618602192 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248182730282 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364233345989 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454374740565 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376379105648 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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