Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more interested in politics today than before.
Students are the backbone of any nation. They play a very crucial role for the development of the nation. During olden days students were not much interested due to lack of knowledge regarding politics. In the present days the situation has been changed totally. Personally, I agree to the statement that today students are more interested in politics than ever before. I would like to provide mainly three reasons in the following paragraphs to support my argument.
First and foremost reason is students want to abolish corruption. Corruption is the most evil thing which destroys the whole nati...
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I think the main mistake in
I think the main mistake in this essay is the use of were instead of are.
Thanks for your comment. I
Thanks for your comment. I have used were only in last paragraph.
First and foremost reason is students want to abolish corruption.
First and foremost reason is that students want to abolish corruption.
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