TPO 03 - Question 1

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TPO 03 - Question 1

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Average: 8 (2 votes)
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2016-10-29 EugeneDubinchuk 70.00 Check this speaking
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oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.

There are other minor reasons to get only 24:

1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.

2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.

3. The last sentence is not clear for us.