TPO 03 - Question 1
| Post dates | Users | rates | Contents |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-15 | silvio deusdara | 66.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2016-10-04 | mgrajapt | 80.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-08-15 | lilly | 83.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2016-10-29 | EugeneDubinchuk | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-04-20 | rahul chauhan | 83.00 | Check this speaking |
- 759 what is more difficult : having new ideas or putting them into practice? why? 70
- 1982 if you have the power, what reforms would you carry out within education? 80
- TPO 02 - Question 5 60
- 2114 how can we encourage more young people to do voluntary work abroad 95
- 1241 Describe a good parent you know.You should say:who the parent ishow you know the parentwhat the parent looks likeand explain why you think the parent is good. 90
Comments
oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.