TPO 03 - Question 1
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2016-10-29 | EugeneDubinchuk | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
2016-12-02 | JohnNYC | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
2017-02-22 | daniel8564 | 58.00 | Check this speaking |
2016-10-15 | SheLaya | 80.00 | Check this speaking |
2017-11-18 | -vv- | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
- 1923 what do find difficult about English? 80
- 1198 Describe a story you liked to listen to when you were a childYou Should SayWhat’s the name of the storyWho told you the storyWhat’s it aboutAnd explain how you feel about this story 70
- TPO 34 - Question 3 70
- 959 do any colors have a special meaning in your culture 80
- 606 do you think young people feel the same about shopping at markets as older people? why? 93
Comments
oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.