Essay topics: TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion teachers are prolifically more appreciated and respected nowadays related to the past because some specific reasons. Nowadays,we have abundantly more educated person in the each society, the public knowledge is astoundingly increased and the countries in all around the world are more democratic, so all of these reason are some proof of the importance of the teacher in modern society and I will illustrate each one of them in the past of the passage.
The first point I'd like to make is that the number of the people how are educated in each level, high educated or just the primary school, they have had a incredibly effects on their society and as of it's consequences, we can see the respect to people who made them. For example if some body go to the class and by this way he or she will can have a astonishing life in the future because of these teachers ,by ignorance of the marvelous effects of this knowledge on the welfare of the society circuitously, directly that person and his family will have a prolifically respect for these teachers.
Second point i'd like to make is the public acknowledge. I think when the people in one country in generall and overally have a more and high khowledge about anything so they can recognize the crucial rule of the teachers in one developed country. So, undoubtedly, they will incredible more evalute these person. For example of the evaluation of the teacher in modern time I can mention to the average income of the teachers in developed county and in the past on these country and on the hand had the low level of the income in the developing county at the same time it is so important the the pepole in the evolutionary process of their culture found out that the teacher always have an incredible and magnificent important role.
Finally I want to mention to the level of the democracy as a measure of the respect to the teacher. In the past we can see that the powerful person or specially dictators always wanted that their people don't have any knowledge about any things until they easily can use them for themselves profits. So, obviously we can see that the information and acknowledgement have had such indispensable importance for improving humans lives standard with the encourage of the productivity in industrial evolution in the developed country. By this way the people gradually found out that this information and institution of the knowlege have an incridible role for their welfare so after that they want to know more and they want more democracy. as one of it's consequences unther some specific circumstances we can see that the people pay attention more and more to their teachers to have a more lightful future.
Conclusively, I want to declare that these institution of the knowledge is an incredible factor for the progression of a nation. If a nation have more respect to it, that nation will have an remarkably progress in their lives and vise versa. So, consequently it can be said that the people undoubtedly with their level of the progress have a respect to their teachers in their soceity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, second, so, for example, i think, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 536.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78171641791 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7932481675 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.39552238806 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 845.1 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5122479899 48.9658058833 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.1875 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.6045352989 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124900988294 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522136991239 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384880421194 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848937476705 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447125304624 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.