Essay topics: TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion teachers are prolifically more appreciated and respected nowadays related to the past because some specific reasons. Nowadays,we have abundantly more educated person in the each society, the public knowledge is astoundingly increased and the countries in all around the world are more democratic, so all of these reason are some proof of the importance of the teacher in modern society and I will illustrate each one of them in the past of the passage.
The first point I'd like to make is that the number of the people who are educated in each level, high educated or just the primary school, they have had an incredibly effects on their society and as of it's consequences, we can see the respect to people who made them. For example, if some body go to the class and by this way he or she have an astonishing life in the future because of these teachers directly that person and his family will have a prolifically respect for these teachers. Furthermore, it is just by ignorance of the marvelous effects of this knowledge on the welfare of the society circuitously which will have an magnificent results on the nations.
Second point I'd like to make is the public acknowledge. I think when the people in one country in generall and overally have a more and high knowledge about anything so, they can recognize the crucial rule of the teachers in one developed country. So, undoubtedly, they will evalute these person incredibly. For example of the evaluation of the teacher in modern time, I can mention to the average income of the teachers in developed county and in the past on these country. Meanwhile, on the hand had the low level of the income of teachers in the developing county at the same time. It is so important that people in the evolutionary process of their culture have found out that the teacher always have an incredible and magnificent important rule.
Finally, I want to mention the level of the democracy as a measure of the respect to teachers. In past, we can see that the powerful person or specially dictators always wanted that their people don't have any knowledge about any things, until they can use them for themselves' s profits easily. So, we can see that the information and acknowledgement have had such indispensable importance for improving humans lives standard with the encourage of the productivity in industrial evolution in the developed country. By this way the people gradually found out that this information and institution of the knowledge have an incredible rule for their welfare. However,by this fact, they want to know more and they appritiate more democracy. as one of it's consequences unther some specific circumstances we can see that the people pay attention more and more to their teachers to have a more lightful future.
Conclusively, I want to declare that these institution of the knowledge is an incredible factor for the progression of a nation. If a nation have more respect to it, that nation will have an remarkably progress in their lives and vise versa. So, consequently it can be said that the people undoubtedly with their level of the progress have a respect to their teachers in their soceity.
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Message: You used an adverb ('remarkably') instead an adjective, or a noun ('progress') instead of another adjective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, for example, i think, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2646.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85504587156 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84151412247 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.394495412844 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 864.9 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6260859432 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.3 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114598482062 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443591955926 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425897013572 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799389489554 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469364897832 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.