Preschool education has always been a essential issue throughout a child’s whole life. Many parents now fell in to a dilemma when facing with the question of whether sending their children to childcare center or asking their relatives to take care of the kids. From my perspective,albeit both have advantages and disadvantages, the former has would bring more benefits for the development of pre-school children.
On the one hand ,it’s undeniable that letting family members such as grandparents to teach their grandson or grand daughter could narrow the generation gap thus creating a close relationship between family members. This family affection serves a significant positive factor to build the child’s characteristic and personality. Besides, the child would receive unconditional love from the elders ,who would supervise and accompany the children in every aspect of their lives. During the meals, the children would be well fed by palatable and nutritious food cooked by the elders. They could also read some stories to the children and tell them some moral values and life experiences from their own experience, which would be a meaningful memory to both generations.
Despite all the benefits mentioned above,I with many families , prefer childcare center to educate their child, mainly because the children could grow and explore by themselves rather by the assistance of other adults. In this way , the child could learn how to communicate and get along with other peers. Unlike the kids who stayed and raised by their relatives, kids who are taught by child centers would not be spoiled and since they were taught and managed in a big group, sense of expressing and sharing could be instilled in their cognition in early formative years.In addition, the teachers in the child center are those with professional training and college degrees, and they have the ability to foster the child’s intellectual, language ,and social skills, which would lay a solid foundation for their elementary study.
In conclusion,albeit family members would provide the child with more attention and accompany ,high-quality childcare center can meet the child’s need and create a more free environment for them to grow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40170940171 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96097557458 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.021722347 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218032125319 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801568090448 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603935996038 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137660450943 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036547552527 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.