Recently, there has been an ongoing debate about whether the regions contribute to individual's success. While some people agreed that the region where one belongs to poses a significant role to his accomplishment, many maintain the opposite opinion. This essay will discuss why the region is in fact influence success of a person.
Firstly, the reason why the place where a person was originated plays a paramount role in his success because of the supports from the government. Should the government care enough for the people's well-being, they should provides financial supports for the good of its people. US government, for instance, establishes a stable funding in the area of researches and new fields of studies, hence many people who are influential to the world were from the USA. In shorts, government of a region influence the people chance of success significantly.
Secondly, the education level and facilities provided in the location also contribute greatly as far as the success of the people are concerned. By enabling the access to the education and opportunities, one could potentially increase the possibility to become successful. Therefore, people with weak economy in the region would also have the chance to thrive. In short, education level from a region help the people to gain accomplish success.
This essay discussed that successful person is heavily influenced by the education access and the support of the government in the place he originated. Therefore, I am consummately in accord that the place of a person belong to is indeed play a huge role in one's accomplishment in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...for the peoples well-being, they should provides financial supports for the good of its ...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...e place of a person belong to is indeed play a huge role in ones accomplishment in l...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...belong to is indeed play a huge role in ones accomplishment in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21072796935 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98522267844 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5088986922 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348050369941 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130691334176 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904071115379 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210606511468 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960836681186 0.0609392437508 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.