If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose?

Climate inconsistency has recently burgeoned to become a growing problem which will potentially lead to many negative consequences. There are a myriad of research studies in order to mitigate the effect of climate change. This essay will discuss the reason why I have chosen to research about how to alleviate air pollution.

There is no denying that air is the most paramount substance in the earth, because it is needed by every single living organisms including human or even creatures in the sea. The increase in air pollution produced by human's activities posed a serious problem. For example, recently the occurrence of cyclone Queensland has increased due to the sudden change in in temperature recently. In short,

Therefore, in order to ameliorate the weather condition, it is important to planting more trees. Trees produce oxygen, which is a important ingredient of fresh air.
For example, the climate and sudden temperature change is rarely found in the mountain where the amount of trees are oxygen level are abundance. Needless to say, plants are important to improve air quality, which is related to the climate change problem we are currently facing.

This essay has discussed the reason why I am consummately in accord to choose a study
air is the most paramount element in the

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...many negative consequences. There are a myriad of research studies in order to mitigat...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
... has increased due to the sudden change in in temperature recently. In short, Ther...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'plant'?
Suggestion: plant
...e weather condition, it is important to planting more trees. Trees produce oxygen, which...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e trees. Trees produce oxygen, which is a important ingredient of fresh air. For...
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Line 8, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...consummately in accord to choose a study air is the most paramount element in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, for example, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14084507042 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80432246192 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0405814663 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5454545455 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115893977437 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046345152168 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475046094688 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557608983052 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539868457114 0.0609392437508 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 74.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.0 Out of 90
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