Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am aspiring candidates for PMP certificate and like to attend the seminar on Project Management professional course to be conducted by your company. One of my colleagues attended your seminar and benefited a lot and I got your reference from him. I want to get some information reading the seminar. Firstly, what are the dates of seminar? Though I work on five days, I need to know which the exact date so that travel itinerary could be finalized. Also, what is the title and objective of the program? I am anticipating that no prior preparation is required for attending the seminar.
Since I would be traveling to Calcutta first time, I have no idea about locations or hotels. Do you arrange accommodation as part of the program? If so, I would not mind to pay extra for hotel. Finally, I must know the cost of the whole program. You may give two cost option one with accommodation and other without accommodation. Besides, please detail the things or facilities which are included in total cost.
I am looking forward to hear from you at least a week in advance from seminar.
Yours faithfully,
Ashish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind paying'.
Suggestion: mind paying
...part of the program? If so, I would not mind to pay extra for hotel. Finally, I must know t...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ed in total cost. I am looking forward to hear from you at least a week in advance fro...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... seminar. Yours faithfully, Ashish
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75252525253 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82991024607 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6265152095 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7333333333 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201585575383 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659651090195 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432771049747 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116185061256 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582868097441 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.