Students should be required to stay in school until the age of eighteen.'
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and /or examples from your own experience.
In all most all the countries primary and secondary educations are continuing until students reached eighteen. Some people argue that students must stay in schools until they complete their secondary education while others believe not. I also agree with this statement in to some extend and here I’m going to discuss my opinions.
To begin with, knowledge is the only thing that cannot be stolen. Hence, I strongly believe that every student should complete their basic education if they don’t have any fair reason to quit the school. Some students cannot attend school until the last grade because of some series issues like poverty, loss parents or other family problems. Otherwise it is essential to have basic knowledge to survive in this competitive world. Furthermore, age is not considerable factor, the only thing that matters whether the student complete his/her secondary education or not. If anyone can finish school life before eighteen that’s ok.
In addition, some students leave school early because they have their own paths. Some start their own businesses at early ages while some have to quit schools as they have to help their family in financially. So that these students start to work somewhere to earn money.
To conclude I think that age doesn’t matter as long as students complete their primary and secondary education. After that they can decide whether they are going for further studies or doing jobs. The only thing that they have to remember is they need to gain knowledge somehow to survive in this competitive world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: ALL_MOST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'almost'?
Suggestion: almost
In all most all the countries primary and secondary...
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Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...so agree with this statement in to some extend and here I'm going to discuss my o...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
... loss parents or other family problems. Otherwise it is essential to have basic knowledge...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve to help their family in financially. So that these students start to work somewhere ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, while, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19607843137 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46458654772 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3978101315 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189191936239 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070850180971 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381808825993 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12213381037 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518525341903 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.