Many people believe that woman make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as woman at parenting.

Essay topics:

Many people believe that woman make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as woman at parenting.

In Asian, most of the people think that woman has an important role in the childhood, they make the better parent than men. Children need the best take care and support carefully because they are very little, they do not have knowledge enough identify which right or wrong. Woman have enough the gentle, mild and deep feel to educate children better than men.

The woman have more gentle and mild which help them to communicate with children easily. Most of the children like sweet, so speaking gently is the best way to teach children. Usually, a mother can use some fairy tales to get children known how to become the good person. Although the man also knows these tales, they do not remember them clearly or they cannot apply in life skillfully. The method to communicate with children is very important, it can make interested care in children then they will understand and remember in a long time.

Besides that, children cannot perform what they want, so the deep feelings in woman help them apprehend what their son or daughter wants. Children are very little to understand all of the trouble in their life, so they need a person to support or advise which is good for them. However, some children think they have enough ability to solve everything and do not need one. So women always understand then they mildly talk with their sons or daughters to help them.

Although the woman is as important as the man, they have the different method to support and teach their sons/daughters, most of the children want to talk with their mother because women are gentle and skillful. The way to teach children is important, they get children want parents to support them or not.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... Children are very little to understand all of the trouble in their life, so they need a p...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76109215017 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30292742083 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467576791809 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9381377493 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274199456446 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118859103732 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977277073019 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197616874981 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102916110761 0.056905535591 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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