Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?

The past decade has seen the rapid development of the real state business, especially in the construction of buildings. This rapid growth has shed light on the potential impacts that these developments have. In this essay, I will examine the arguments to determine the overall outcome.

The construction of building surged as an answer for the scarce housing that were experiencing many cities. These constructions evolved to transform into enormous skyscrapers that provide space to allocate housing and offices. Eventually, these new mega structures allowed people to have affordable apartments, that in many ways solved the issue of housing shortage and release the burden of the community and the government. This is exemplified by the demographic rates that the 2017 census showed in the USA, according to the data up to 55% of the population were living or working in buildings.

On the other side, there is much controversy regarding the potential harmful implications of the building on the environment, eco-system, and health. These concerns focus the attention in the way that buildings disrupt the environment by depleting the soil and pushing the animals outside of their natural habit. Ultimately, it is constantly noted the physical and emotional effects that buildings have on humans, by blocking the daylight and creating an artificial setting. For instance, the University of Colorado demonstrated that the buildings deeply affect the emotions and perception of the humans by leading them to depression and other mental issues.

In summary, it was argued the different consequences that buildings brought into the community reaching the conclusion that facing facts the buildings improved the overall well-being of the population.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52222222222 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99204477934 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2688016818 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150500771405 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047798475171 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288011538535 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790612566736 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00871506573404 0.0609392437508 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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