In developing countries, tourism has advantages and disadvantages.

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In developing countries, tourism has advantages and disadvantages.

In recent times, there has been a great debate regarding advantages and disadvantages about tourism in developing countries. In this essay, I shall discus the important factors that play a significant positive role in tourism. Some favorite destinations that we enjoy most are those places that offer more for the money we spent.

There are many reasons why developing countries have advantages in visiting them. One reason is that humans are fining remote and underdeveloped countries as superb destinations to visit because of the variety of services they offer. For example, cheap pricing in hotel, food and cab fairs. Another important factor is the fact that people in capitalistic governments make more money than people living in third world countries. This results in getting more services for the monetary value we spend. In this case advantages overcome disadvantages.

In addition, to this argument there are also some negative influences for such traveling experiences. For example, poor road infrastructure, higher crime rates, getting ripped off by foreign traveling agencies and organizations that are hosting visitors. Research suggests, that at least two out of five travelers visiting countries that have not ever been there before with end up disappointed by the whole experience. As a result, fewer people will visit these destinations. Therefore, in order to have continuing flux of travelers governments of these countries should invest well in supplying the right resources to develop tourism. Although it may seem unrealistic, these countries are developing fast due to the amount of money we are spending overseas.

In conclusion, tourism is vastly growing. People are traveling and vacationing more with their families. It is important for travelers to find destinations which they will enjoy and relax. Nowadays, in my opinion we are looking for places that offer us safe, cheap and reliable destinations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, third, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47333333333 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96629211119 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7124494138 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4210526316 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207864719424 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656714696201 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101016668306 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12806733711 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784493307461 0.0609392437508 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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