People living in the 21st century are enjoying better quality of life compared to people who lived in the pervious centuries. To what extend to do you agree or disagree?
Humankind fundamental concern has been to facilitate every thing since the down of time. It seems, in a last century, the peoples' way of living has changed in positive trend. In spite of some drawbacks, peoples’ quality of life has enhanced in comparison with prior years which I will discuss here.
In the one hand, technology provides new inventions and amenities for people. However, with appearing factories and automobiles some conurbations suffered from pollutant particles. Factories and car's emissions contaminated our air and water resources. Furthermore, in this age with increasing of population rate in some countries due to lack of supervision on nations, some country's encounter with catastrophes such as famine, drought, extinction of rare animals and so on. As this show, besides some improvement in contrast to our ancestor's period of time, some problems exacerbated bay wrong decision and actions but optimistically thinking, it appears that the advantage of living in a recent century is our weight in comparison with previous century.
On the other hand, nowadays, peoples utilizes new invention for their convenience. In this sense, technology provides facilities such as the Internet, television, smart phone, and equipment to give hand house wives to do their house works. In addition to this that in comparison to last century, our life became colorful and convenient. It has been proven that new appliances enrich our leisure life, and the invention of train and planes makes it easy and possible to travel long distance in short time. Thus, people enjoy high level of living, and it will continue.
In conclusion, it seems that technology speeds up the process of innovation, and the modality of people life has increased in comparison to our ancestor's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in short, such as, in contrast to, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32042253521 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94595865321 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2834248657 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142572837689 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515602789703 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538002258088 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100987012915 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471500536287 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.