More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It is true that cities are often seen as the places of opportunities, which attracts a lot of people to migrate to. However, there are also some drawbacks created for those who hopes to enjoy city life. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve inhabitants' life in cites.
The main problem for anyone who chooses to live in urban areas is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than it is in rural areas. For example, many people migrate to a metropolis, resulting in an increasing in the demands for accommodations, food and services. Consequently, these people might survive in insanity conditions, lack of both education and medicine. Another issue affecting on city people is poor air qulity and traffic congestion. A dramatic rise in a number of commuters is a key factor influencing air quality, and this puts a train on cities' infrastructure.
On the other hand, there are various measures that governments can take to tackle these problems. Firstly, a simple step to decrease cost of living is to invest money in the affordable or social housing projects. Secondly, an investment on developing cleaner public transport might not only curb traffic flows, but also reduce air pollution caused by vehicle emissions. A third option would be to move industry and jobs to rural regions or develop provincial towns. By doing this, everyone in rural areas will have equal opportunities to promote career prospect instead of finding chances in large cities.
In conclusion, there are a range of steps governments could implement to enhance the quality of city life for all residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 567, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...g air quality, and this puts a train on cities infrastructure. On the other hand, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97777777778 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84895475743 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637037037037 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1820655522 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277066867821 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799098160836 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607494446205 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164879052547 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768551407978 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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