Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Waqas,
Hope you are doing great.
I'm just writing you to tell you about my recent job switch, as I found something new of my interest.
I was really fed up with being HR Operations Manager for last 8 years. As you know me that I get bored of things quickly if I'm not feeling challenged and learning new tricks and skills.
I've now joined a new manufacturing company as Training & Development Manager, where every day there is something new for me. I've got to structure whole training department for my new company. I will also be conducting training sessions for executives fortnightly on different soft skill topics.
I also have some great news- as we are going to have our first baby in three months time. This is a very exciting time for me and my family specially my wife. Do visit us as soon as you can.
Looking forward to see you soon.
Fahad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Waqas, Hope you are doing great. Im just writing you to tell you about my r...
^^
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...last 8 years. As you know me that I get bored of things quickly if Im not feeling challe...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e that I get bored of things quickly if Im not feeling challenged and learning new...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... and learning new tricks and skills. Ive now joined a new manufacturing company ...
^^^
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...very day there is something new for me. Ive got to structure whole training departm...
^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
... as soon as you can. Looking forward to see you soon. Fahad
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61146496815 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5248326049 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732484076433 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0805405358 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8181818182 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0915925661946 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359909854177 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028299104027 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524594109579 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217324261606 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.