Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working believe other famliy members like grandparents can be take care of their children while others think child care centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In competitive era, parents have hectic schedule due to working so child care has become a big phenomenon. A section of society believe that grandparents are the best care takers, however, childcare centers are not the back seat in providing good care to kids. I personally believe that elder parents bring about the positive changes in offsprings. This notion will analyse both intends along with my opinion before giving a logical conclusion.
To commence with, there are various factors show the importance of grandparents care. First and foremost, grand mother and father are more close to their children. That's why, they know very well about likes and dislikes. As a result, children enjoy their life and feel more glad. Secondly, elder parents have a lot of experience own their life. They recoginze the difference between good and bad activities and contain more childcare skills. Consequently, they acts as stepping stone ti uplift their life standard. The last but not the least, that grandparents are the ocean of knowledge about local culture, rituals, customs and so on. They are inspiration for new generation. Therefore, juveniles get ample opportunities to know about their conventional era.
On the other hand, kid care centers also play a cardinal role to boost up their childhood life because when children enroll there that time offspring learn many splended qualities such discipline, team work, co-operation, punctuality and so on. In results, these skills are worthwhile to maintain good relationship with family and society. Moreover, if children attend childcare centres then those kids do not feel terrible to join a school as they become their habbits to keep away from their family mambers. Therefore, these children show more interest in study.
To my way of thinking, every garden has weeds but to spend time with their grandparents is blessing to learn the importance of family and kids feel more safe and secure.
To sum up, by providing care of grandparets is largerly fruitful but individual can not neglact the service of childcare centers.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22985074627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72078376401 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6614837423 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280429417117 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699404409662 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607187876797 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144922394113 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814877434398 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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