The bar chart displays how occupations were distributed by English citizens in both genders in the year of 2005. It can be clearly seen that men were mostly interested in management and technical aspect, meanwhile women tended to be keen on doing common office tasks.
In details, the most striking figure was 20% of men having skill-trades relevant job, while it was only 3% of women took part in. The same scenario happened to operation occupation (process, plant and machine operatives), which contributed as approximately 12% for men and 3% for women. Professional, technical and elementary were the three segments that have the same amount of employees by both genders, within the range of 12% to 15%.
On the other hand, women dominated in writing office task, especially in administrative and technical, which reached a peek at 22% respectively. Following that were personal service and sales and customer service, which were nearly 15% and 12% in order. The probability of men joined these aspects was quite low, no more than 6%.
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- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 11
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 11
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
... technical aspect, meanwhile women were tend to be keen on doing common office tasks...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be keen on doing common office tasks. In details, the most striking figure wa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nders, within the range of 12% to 15%. On the other hand, women dominated in w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07558139535 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83546338771 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7391917417 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0636787731007 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342037975165 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786750649046 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472479307105 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547899293131 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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