In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, it has become far more normal for people to live alone instead of living with others like a family. From my own perspective, I believe that this tendency has both positive and negative influences on their development.
On the one hand, there are various advantages created to promote more people to live without help raher than depend on a companion or family. First of all, solitary people often become much more independent and self-reliant than those choose to live with others. These people, for example, are able to cook, clean, pay bills and manage their budgets by themselves, resulting in valuable life skills to live better. Furthermore, another benefit of living alone is that they have much more freedom and private time than individuals who live with their family members. In other words, their free time can be spent on ways give their a feeling of happyness and satisfation without being controlled.
On the other hand, apart from above benefits, people who would like to be solitary also face some drawbacks, which can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, although they can be free in their interests, a feeling of loneliness and isolation is inevitable for people living alone. For instance, alone people face social problems such as a failure of love or job, resulting in invisible pressure on their life, while people living with family are likely to overcome these issues more easily because of helps from family members. Secondly, when living alone, people will bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities. Whereas people who live with family can be shared financial costs, solitary people have to be accountable for all of the living cost.
In conclusion, it seems to me that life of people living alone will have both beneficial and detrimental effects that they need to consider before making a decision about their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0447284345 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56779982347 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.895476137 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3846153846 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226892291957 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949248621237 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501373763182 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151460230306 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482464721734 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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