Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of the issue of mass media and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that widespread influence of mass media might be highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the impacts of mass media on the general public can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From journalists' standpoints, mass media can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that print media, as well as editorials, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered [the idea that TV, newspapers and radio can form the society. Thus, beneficial ramifications of such an idea apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, influence of mass media might increase the consequences of shaping people's ideas. Moreover, fundamental aspects of being a major source of information relate to this reality that the demerits of broadcasting pre-selected contents lead to mold people’s minds. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of listening to a specific radio station is correlated negatively with believing political propaganda. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of the influence of mass media.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of mass media far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of such concept prove the significance of the pivotal role in a young person's opinion], but also pinpoint digital revolution era implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44014084507 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18315117431 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0302367551 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212979235369 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722608493334 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457603417434 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115459512951 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00974054703991 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 55.0591133005 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.