Smoking causes cancer. Cigarette companies want to reduce the age from which people can smoke to 12 years old. Governments believe that only adults should be allowed to smoke.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position.
Smoking is injurious to health which is known universally and its enjoying it's widespread popularity among young people. In order to raise the sales of cigarettes, tobacco companies are in favor of diminishing the age up to 12 years old for smoking, albeit the government bodies want to restrict it up to adults only. This essay will discuss the two reasons why governments should not allow these organizations to accomplish their goals and smoking should be permissible for mature people only.
To commence with, smoking is inclined to addiction which is hard to get rid off for many smokers. And children at age 12 are an easy target to get trapped into this life threatening web. According to many health specialists, children who commence smoking at an early age get addicted to it quickly and rehabilitation is the only solution for them to get rid of smoking. Therefore, government bodies should always keep the smoking permissible for adults only so that the youngsters can't avail it.
Furthermore, smoking cigarettes is bad for growing bodies. The lungs in children develops completely up to the age of 18 years and if these young people starts smoking at an early age their lungs may not develop properly. Young smokers, for instance, may suffer from many lung diseases including lung cancer as well. Hence, smoking which affects adversely to developing children should not be get exposed to it.
This essay has explored that smoking from the age of 12 can make the children more addicted to it and can also impact their growing bodies adversely. Overall, I strongly believe that government should keep its accessibility to adult people only and should not permit the cigarette companies to reduce the age for smoking up to 12 years old.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...o health which is known universally and its enjoying its widespread popularity amon...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...many smokers. And children at age 12 are an easy target to get trapped into this ...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... for adults only so that the youngsters cant avail it. Furthermore, smoking cigar...
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Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the age for smoking up to 12 years old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99317406143 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70969127747 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511945392491 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5857313387 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366643216327 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141316860677 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776005980246 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247721699428 0.151781067708 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734902736583 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.