In the world, there are several languages speak by different individuals. Many people know more than one language because of they have special skill and struggle, and also very helpful to speak with whatever native language speaker. I am totally disagree with this statement. I will discuss some points and give example in my further paragraphs.
To begin with, if we know more than one language always useful in this world. First, if know other language we easy to understand and get information without any difficult. Moreover, we can use that language in our teaching proficient. For instance, nowadays, most of the students and employees go to English speaking countries, which there is first required to proficient in the English language. So it is necessary for everyone who want to go there. second, we can easily make relation and speak with who people which language we know very well, and easily get information from their people and easily provide guidelines to them.
In addition to, we know more than one language means a special skill we have. Furthermore, we go to out of state and country, there very useful such these languages and there native people never make foolish to our.
To conclusion, more than one language is very a special skill and helpful in every step of go outside in states and nations. Also, if we know other languages we can easy touch with those people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...Many people know more than one language because of they have special skill and struggle, and al...
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...r native language speaker. I am totally disagree with this statement. I will discuss som...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...sary for everyone who want to go there. second, we can easily make relation and speak ...
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Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easily get information from their people and easily provide guidelines to them. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92827004219 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54777561897 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2194211825 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4285714286 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163533328504 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700455802813 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599158799264 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126784110629 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321246403164 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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