What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
Living in big cities in comparison to the rural areas can bring umpteen benefits as technology has enabled the big cities to acquire all the essential facilities. People living in big cities have numerous benefits as opposed to rural areas. This essay will discuss some of the positive aspects of residing in urban areas in comparison to the small villages and will suggest effective solutions to these issues.
People living in urban areas have better infrastructure compared to the villages and have better road network too. This not only helps dwellings to go one place to another fast but also enhance their lifestyle. In rural areas, the government needs to work on the infrastructure and on the road network in order to raise the living standard of people residing there. This will help to improve the economy of the country.
Medical facilities in cities are way better than villages as there are numerous multi-specialties hospitals are available. It has observed in recent reports that age expectancy of people living in cities is higher in comparison to the ones’ residing in villages and main cause behind this is the lack of hospitals in villages. The medical authorities need to take initiative to open new hospitals in the rural areas with better treatment facilities. This will not only improve their lives but also raise the country’s level globally.
In the end, it can be concluded that there are various positive aspects of living in a big city in contrast to the ones living in urban areas and the government needs to implement a number of policies to overcome the issues faced by dwellings of villages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...to rural areas. This essay will discuss some of the positive aspects of residing in urban a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03296703297 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75682337819 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468864468864 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2652065549 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.25397266985 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228242936767 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907548170881 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905558626388 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154274747948 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794984718164 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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