Numbers of plants and animals are declining. Describe the reasons and possible solution.
It is undoubtly the case that nowadays, number of plants and animals become decreasing day by day which is also affecting the society adversely. Through this essay, I am going to explain the possible reasons of this problem and I have to say that, "prevention is better than cure" so, I am going to suggest some preventive measures which authorities could implement to reduce the destruction of Flora and fauna.
The first step is to understand why number of plants and animals become decreasing? Broadly speaking, there are mainly two reasons for this. The first and foremost is construction of industries. In this present scenerio, plethora of industries are available, manufacturing of chemical fertilizers as well as sugar from raw material would be the perfect epitome. These huge industries requires massive area to construct. Therefore, people prefer to cut the trees to make a land. As a result, it is also responsible for vandalism of habitat of some animals too. To overcome this problem, it is important to plant a tree by the industries owners, which helps to maintain the balance of ecosystem. Moreover, second reason for the loss of biodiversity is regular increase in the numbers of individuals (natality rate) which directly effects the abiotic factors of ecosystem because, due to increase in the number of individuals competition for shelter also increases among the species of plants and animals. This problem can be solved by educating the member of society to promote afforestation which ultimately leads to save lives of wild animals as well as plants because, they are 'part and parcel' of our life.
In summary, I have to say that nodoubt, for survival of human beings shelter and industries are required but, life of human beings is only possible if there is a balance between ecosystem so, it is only possible if plants and animals were protected by us. This obstacle could be solved by planting more and more trees by the firm owners as well as individuals itself. As a result, we are able to overcome the problem of vandalism of flora and fauna.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, broadly speaking, in summary, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84651059006 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508620689655 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.168744129 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215548484689 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06673458893 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638261613575 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146531844967 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206466333339 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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