Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.
Discuss both and give your opinion.
Humanity is the most influent group of creatures in the world. Unfortunately, many of anthropological changes were harmful for environment like deforestation or ozone hole. Some damages may be fixed (eg. endangered species), while others are insurmountable, such as greenhouse effect or extinct species. However, people should be aware of their behaviour and try to protect our planet against ourselves and stop to destroy environment.
To begin with, west countries should stop producing garbage, especially plastics. Rich countries claim they collect and recycle rubbish, meantime most plastics are laying in recycle companies or are sold to China. Recently China refused to buy our garbage and I am afraid that we will be poisoned by them. Besides, many litters has been already found in Oceans and animals suffer, even perish because of them and this phenomenon may be changed, but every nation should participate in it.
Additionally, we should drop fossil fuels behalf renewables as quickly as possible, continuing develop of clean energy is the key if we want to diminish global warming rate. The most promising technologies are: wind, geothermal, solar and hydro power. In case of reduction using coal and other in central heating will rehabilitate air quality which we are breathe in.
Furthermore, other example of human’s greed, egoism and destructive actions is palm oil plantation and deforestation. Nowadays palm oil is the common vegetable oil in the world because of its properties, so it’s production expand rapidly. Thus, farmers burn trees and swamps releasing carbon and methane into the atmosphere. Additionally, many animals are affected losing home and source of food like chimpanzees. Some of the animals die during this procedure, thereby society should do its best to stop it. There have been government and private sector response already, but it has not break deforestation satisfactorily. In this case, consumers should influence producers to use rapeseed, sunflower oil or other instead palm oil. Unhappily, palm oil is solid in room temperature like trans oils, but I believe it can be replaced if conscious consumers want to buy healthy and environmental friendly food.
To sum up, environmentals’ damages should be fixed such us: plant forests and green spaces. Reducing livestock production, enhancing soils and focusing on local production, generally speaking agriculture may reduce impacts of growing and producing foods. Personal solutions are also crucial, reducing usage of private automobiles, conserving energy or no-waste lifestyle may help. We should think globally, solutions require international, national and local governance regulations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, such as, i am afraid, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2305.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62195121951 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08351433889 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663414634146 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5914071637 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0416666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160165630477 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039925149754 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373121456435 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780996004906 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427333816709 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.