Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
Many students work on their extra time, and it is encouraged in many countries. However, part-time jobs are not supported in many countries. As far as I'm concerned, I'm in favor of having some kind of work and in this essay, I will explain my point of view.
First of all, part time employment provides financial support to the students. In most of the countries, tutees face different kinds of financial issues and they are unable to bear expenses of their studies. To fulfill their fiscal needs, they must work after their institutional hours to accommodate their fiscal needs.
Furthermore, doing some kind of work in their spare time, also helps them to prepare for their practical life. Studies have shown that the students who have some kind of internship of job are more likely to succeed as compared to those who have no work experience. Many organizations prefer those candidates who have some sort of work experience.
On the other hand, in some countries, people have opinion that doing some kind of paid tasks affect students' studies which, in the long run, isn't advantageous for them. They work on different kind of jobs on the cost of their studies which will be detrimental for their career in future.
Although pros and cons are always there, but overall, doing some sort of internship will be in favor of students. Moreover, they must maintain a study-work balance to avoid any kind of possible harms in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, kind of, sort of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87755102041 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57251030049 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534693877551 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2643531769 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.9230769231 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149582794079 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643152233798 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491151852276 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884141671292 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529122734544 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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