Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing.
In this modern era, which is overwhelmed with the electronic and social media, there are good chances for some people to get fame and become a rising star even at their early age. I opine it as beneficial not only for their career life but for their personal life as well. The purpose of this essay is to outline the merits of becoming famous at a young age. But before going into details, one should keep in mind that pros and cons are always there.
First of all, people who get any kind of fame due to their exceptional talent become lucky enough to access to best institutes or organizations.
Once they become popular, they are immediately acquired by one of the top companies to become its part. For instance, Arfa Kareem, who created a world record by achieving Microsoft certification in the youngest age, was hired by Microsoft. She was the youngest employee of Miscrosoft.
Furthermore, these extraordinary children play an imperative role towards the development of their society. These talented people, who have proved themselves in early ages, are much more capable of doing herculean tasks, innovations and achievements which seem to be impossible to average people. Even though they are smaller in age, but their achievements are massive and these precious gems made their nation proud.
In conclusion, people who become famous even before getting adult, are fruitful to our society. If their sustenance is done well, they would continue to perform exceptionally in their fields and make this world a better place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...al talent become lucky enough to access to best institutes or organizations. Once they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67433996065 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0505736336 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2307692308 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173928223523 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648742103328 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883193855451 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911258349174 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675142238622 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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