Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays some people are more enthusiastic on exercise on the other hand some believe on dieting. In this essay I would like to discuss on the the importance of dieting and exercise for the mankind.
On my point of view people should take a healthy meal for their breakfast, lunch and dinner as well. Nutritionists’ advice people to add more fresh vegetables, fruits and green leaves for their meals. At the same time they advice people to add more grains for their main meals. Besides above mentioned instructions researchers have found that breakfast is the most important meal of the day which should not be skipped by anyone. Also lunch has to be consisted with grains, meat, vegtables and green leaves. However nutritionist instruct to take a light meal as their dinner.
Consequently, people should consider on exercising as well as a balanced diet. Since most of the people are involve in white colour jobs, they need to do exercises to burn their excess fat. This current trend is evident on looking at the number of gyms around a particular city. Our boady needs exercises to maintain good physical and mental health.
In conclusion it is recommended to consume healthy meal and drink lot of water together with regular exercises. It is more important to remember to maintain an optimal level of speed and time of exercising to maintain good health and mental condition. This initiative would enhance to the gross domestic product of a particular country together with an efficient and effective environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... which should not be skipped by anyone. Also lunch has to be consisted with grains, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, look, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03937007874 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77498457673 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1095378072 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186509818284 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653866869921 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709007570962 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129418380254 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834097614762 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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